I must say this is quite a beautiful piece, though I am disturbed by certain details.
Firstly, the snowflakes, to me, appear somewhat large and irrealistic. They look like paper cut-outs and I believe they should be smaller and more transparent. I also do not believe the clouds should be darkened in their middles there, I don't see any light source making so necessary. But as always, your starry night backgrounds are admirable; dreamy.
Now concerning the way you drew your OCs, in this piece comes your recurrent error of drawing animal limbs faultily. I believe the elbow bone does not protrude that much and the wrists appear so thin and bony (Stain).
Tora's expression seems a bit exaggerated, though I love Stain's.
I also love how much the fur shading is detailed but I think it shouldn't be that precise on Stain's side. Tora's tail suffers from this too, but it's more acceptable. I also think that you need to study animal ears more and see how they really fold.
Other than that, I adore Stain's horns but I believe they should leave more streaks or 'taller' streaks than that. Concerning the paw streaks, the only ones I have a problem with are the yellow and red ones; a bit too 'solid', not gentle enough.
But overall, this is a nice piece speaking of calmness, beauty and freedom.
thank you for the critique !
i'll take notice of all that c: thanks for helping me to improve !
1-month-late reply x_x I'm really not interested in the internet currently xD
Sinon, ça va Tigrou ?
aaaaah amira xD j'ai eu un gros doute mais je me doutait que c'était toi u_u tu reviens en créant encore un nouveau compte ? ça t'en fait combien maintenant ?
bah écoute moi ça va et toi ? C:
UN MILLION DE COMPTES. Bientôt personne ne pourra rejoindre DA à cause du manque de pseudonymes
Moi ça va aussi :V T'as combien de personnages maintenant xp?
carrément tu pollue tout la XP
euuh j'sais pas pas tant que ça ._. regarde dans mon folder OC dans ma gallery (dsl la flemme de compter xD)